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Commutation Failure [North Italy X Reader] Ch 1

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“Mrs. Hilson, when are we going to have the online chat discussion for homework” A girl named Alexia asked the woman teacher. (Name) was now in her 5A English class and the first thing she heard, after the test, Alexia’s voice. The (h/c) girl cringed at Alexia’s annoying high voice. It’s seemed as If Alexia took helium every morning before school then another after school. The red head flipped her hair and lend on her left hand waiting for an answer.
“I was waiting till all my students could at less read and respond in English, but since everyone seems so eager for it…Today’s group homework is to read chapters one threw six of To Kill a Mocking Bird and respond, using your own words, to the question that appears on the chat.” Mrs. Hilson said causing the (h/c) to glare wholes into the red head, head.
“If only I was the daughter of super man.” (Name) thought sighing as she lead into her chair. The red head, Alexia, flipped her long her almost hitting (Name). (Name)’s (e/c) eyes widen at how closed it was to her face. Alexia raised her hand again.
“Will the chat be on Edmodo[1]?” Alexia asked the teacher causing Mrs. Hilson to nod answering yes. (Name) cringed again as the girl spooked; she really hated Alexia’s voice. Mrs. Hilson looked around the room for more hands before she turned around to write the bell-ringer [2] for next week’s first hour class.  
“Mrs. Hilson, will the other students be on the chat?” A boy asked out loud. Mrs. Hilson stopped writing as she thought of an answer. When she thought one up she began to write.
“It depends…” Mrs. Hilson said starting on another sentence. The answer made the blond boy lend in his chair more, touching the girls back sitting in front of him. The boy’s name was Alfred F. Jones. He’s the baseball team’s ace [3], makes all A’s in his classes [4], can speak more than ten languages [5], and (name)’s number one best friend.  Alfred sighed and looked at (Name) with his famous puppy eyes because he was disappointed with not being able to talk to the non- English speakers.
“Poor Alfred,” (Name) thought and laughed at her friend’s pouting face. Alfred sticks his tongue at her. The bell ranged for the last time for the week. Everyone got up and walked to their bus or car. (Name) walked to her bus and opened the book To Kill a Mocking Bird. A minute later, Alfred sat next to (Name) and pulled out his phone to listen to music. When the bus finally moved, (Name) looked up from her book to fine Alfred sitting next to her. The (h/c) girl tapped Alfred on the shoulder causing Alfred to look up from his phone.
“I thought you had practiced today.” (Name) said. Alfred took off his head phones and looked at (Name).
“Cancelled,” Alfred said. (Name) looked at him crazy. “Rain,” (Name) lends back in the bus sit and looked at the moving town in front of her. “I saw you staring at that Italian student at lunch today.”
(Name) sighed turning her attention back at Alfred. “So what…It’s not like I like him or anything.” (Name) but the book, which was on her lap, inside her book sack.        
“I’ve never seen you look at someone so long-…” Alfred mumbled to himself before getting slapped on the arm by (Name). Alfred whined in pain at her attack. “I’m telling the truth.”
(Name) sighed, “I look because I can’t talk.”
The dirty blond wiped pretend tears from his eyes and sniffed, “That’s beautiful man.” The (h/c) rolled her eyes playfully. “You always could of asked me translate for you two.” He lends closer to (Name)’s ear and whispered, “I’ll do anything for your future husband.” The female flown at the male next to her.
“I know you’re joking, but I bet you think I like him.”
“Yes I do-…” Alfred screamed in pain for the second time today. “Your slaps hurt.”
“They were meant to hurt.”
“But anyway, I overheard from the teachers that, that Italian boy can read and write English, but can’t speak it. So by that comment I think he’s going to be a part of that group chat.”
“So why are you telling me this?”
“’cause I want to be the god father from the movie God Father.” This caused the (s/c) female to give the male a look. “No really.” Alfred look ahead and stood up once the bus stop. The bus driver opened the doors and let everyone out. (Name) waved good bye to Alfred before walking home.
Later that night, the talk began. (Name) was impress about all the ideas every one of her classmates were making about the book. Now it was ten minutes till it was over, (Name) hasn’t seen him or his brother anywhere on the board. “I just need to respond to one more comment and I’ll be done.” (Name) thought as she srached her arms over her head and in front of her. She yond realizing how tried she really was. The (race) girl lend on the right hand as she scrolled threw the board. There was no one to respond to. Either she already respond to them or they were logged of. “How I’m I-…” Just as the (h/c) girl was about to give up, the blue earth in the far right glow red, telling her someone commented on the board.
“What I thought I was the only one still here.” (Name) click the earth and it loaded responds that when to the bottom of the screen. (Name)’s (e/c) eyes whined as the amount of updates. The girl clicked on the confersion and scrolled threw them all. Almost more than half of the students were commented on by the same two people. “No way, whoever these guys are they can really type fast.” The girl’s computer screen was lighting up to the amount of updates. (Name) wanted someone else to see this, but Alfred was a sleep and Gilbert was doing all the missed homework his “forgot” to do. Bing! It was now (Name)’s turn. “Who are you?”
The girl hover over the icon and her (e/c) eyes whined. Almost all the breath was taken from her at that second she read Feliciano Vargas. “Alfred how did you-…” After that thought she was sent at message in private. The girl’s heart sped up as she clicks it. The box appeared with Feliciano’s comment and all it said was…
Feliciano V.: Hi!
(Name) didn't know how to reacted or respond. The guy she’s been wanting to be friends with is now texting her. It seemed un real. The girl noticed that Feliciano was writing something because little dots with in the left conuer of the box. But she didn't get a chance to watch the dots move, by the amount of time Feliciano typed.
Feliciano V.: You’re the only one that still here besides my brother.
Name couldn't believe what was happening as she read the message over and over again, afraid it was going to go away.
Feliciano V.: Do you want to talk?
The (h/c) girl’s heart began to sped again as the read talk. She thought about how to answer and typed…
(Name) (Surname).: Sure…what do you want to talk about?
Feliciano V.: What do you like to do?
[1]- Edmodo...: Okay if you didn't know what edmodo is, it's a social network for school.  What you do on there is homework from your teacher. The only way you could join it if your teacher signs up and makes a code. 
[2]- bell-ringer...: A bell ringer is what you do in school before the late bell. 
[3]- baseball team’s ace...: Since baseball's the American past time, I wanted America to play baseball and be the ace....because why not.
[4]- makes all A’s in his classes...: I think America's smart and chose not to show he's smart.
[5]- can speak more than ten languages...: The reason I wrote this was because in America English is the main language we speak, then there Spanish, after that there's French.  

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God I love this story so much
I keep coming back to it in hopes of reading the next chapter that is to come out
Ahhh so lovely ;v;
Please continue on
For a story good as this is a rare thing to come by now a days ~